Title: The Goals That I Want To Achieve In my Englcom Class
Thesis Statement: Setting up long-term goals can help me in
my Englcom Class
I.
Introduction
A.
Misconceptions about Goals
B.
Thesis Statement
II.
Body
A.
Goals
1.
To become relevant and significant writer
2.
To graduate with the accurate ideas in
presenting what I want
3.
To improve my skills in communication
B.
Steps in Achieving the Goals
1.
To communicate with others that will give me
ideas
2.
To ask people on how to improve my writing
skills
3.
To read works about what authors say in writing
4.
To organize my thoughts so that I can have a
smooth run of my writing
C.
Results in Achieving my Goals
1.
Self-fulfilment in life
2.
Happiness in achieving something that is hard
3.
Learned the skills and can apply it to everyday
life
III.
Conclusion
A.
Example
B.
Summary
Your outline is very easy to read. The only thing I could comment on is maybe you could identify the misconceptions of goals, and practice parallelism. There are some parts in your outline that are not parallel. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteAll I can comment in your outline is the parallelism in the body part C. Because the overall outline is good.And I think that you misconceptions of goals is an attention grabber because it easily grabbed my attention when I first read the outline
ReplyDeleteThe overall outline is very commendable, especially for the thesis statement. But one thing I can comment on is about the results part because the ideas are not parallel to each other. Thank you!
ReplyDeleteyou should atleast arrange your supporting details according to importance.. and by the way you observed parallelism, except in the body part C.. nice attention grabber.
ReplyDeleteThesis Statement may still be improved. The attention grabber really grabbed my attention :) parallelism may still be improved. Outline is quite clear b^^d
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