Several people have doubted
themselves when they are establishing
goals. There are studies proven that when people establish goals and follow
them, they will be successful in the future. Goals can help you achieve what
you want if you attain it.
There are several goals that I want to
attain in my Englcom Class. With those goals, I want to have accomplishments
when I do my goals so that I can be successful. My goals for Englcom Class is
to be a relevant and significant writer, to improve my skills in communication,
and to graduate with accurate ideas on how I present it. I can not complete my goals if I have no process to
follow, because if there is no process, then it can lead me in defying what I want
for my goals. Some steps that I need to follow is communicating with others who
can give me ideas on how to present my writing skills, asking people on how to
improve my writing skills, reading works about
what authors say in writing, and organizing my thoughts so that I can have a smooth run when it comes to
expressing my own ideas when it is the time for writing.
It is a difficult process for
me to ponder about if I am establishing my goals, but with the hardwork that I put in to
it , and the sacrifices that I will give up just to attain those goals, the
results are going to be worthy. I can have self-fullfillment in life just by
doing well, I can attain the happiness in achieving something hard because
English is my waterloo, and I can learn the different skills that I will apply
in my everyday life. If you grace under pressure, and make the most out of your
life, then you can have a fruitful life in the future.
I know now what to do
when it comes to my goals. For example, whenever there is a quiz or a research
work, I need to give my 100 percent effort in obtaining a high grade, and share
what I just learned to people who have a difficult time in English. Basically,
Goals are engines that are hard to process, but given time to work hard for, it
may be an easy task to do. You need a process to obtain what you want from
those goals, and you can achieve several fulfillments in those goals.
I think your introduction should be less broad; I think there should be more specific and supporting statements. Be a little more mindful of your grammar as well as vocabulary. There are a couple of minor usage problems here and there. I do get the point you are trying to make but just be wary of the words you use because they make the essay confusing.
ReplyDeleteNice presentation of ideas! The thesis statement was stated and elaborated very well. If there is one thing to improve, it is the choice of words. Heavy words will create more impact on your essay. The introduction still lacks some components. Work more on the intro to enhance your essay more. Each paragraph is supported by well explained supporting details about the thesis statement. It is also sequenced accordingly. The conclusion is supported by a solution and it appeals very interesting. Very interesting essay! :)
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